After a different group seeing our film this is what feedback we got:
Title sequence - too simple, white on black
Framing - cut off faces
Handheld - shaky/messy
Focus - in and out (unintentional)
Continuity error 2.41 180degrees and at 3.39
Slow
Costume?
Good lighting
Music worked
Good range of angles
Nice Colour
After showing our film to everyone this is what we got back from everyone:
Could not tell if the shakiness at the beginning was on purpose.
Music was good
Colour balance was good
Day 4 - the paste needs to be picked up
The area where Max slept, the shoes and clothes do not need be to shot and the 2nd shot of him sleeping is not needed either
Maybe with the titles for Day 1,2,3,4,5,6 maybe they could have be 1,2,5,10 or not even needed
Good transition of night to day where Max runs off into the distance
There was no music credits for Mike and Dave
Nice edit
Story is clear and it worked
More tine in music, needed to be lifted a bit near the end.
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